Healthy criticism? Pleaaase and thank you!?

WOW! Criticism you say? I have none what so ever. I really liked your poem a lot. I tend to enjoy reading the dark and heavy stuff, it is a nice change from all the love poetry and beautiful rainbow fru-fru stuff you hear quite often! Great poem! Dont let anyone tell you otherwise. Dark and heavy is just as good if not better then love or longing poems. Thumbs up. .....By the way, I hope you are feeling a little bit better after getting some anger and frustration out. TC